Re: Currently working on a short book about ZOMBIESSZZZ!!!

by **Superevil225** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:11 pm

Nice story... I'd say that the dialouge sounds a little scripted, if you know waht I mean... Other than that I like it.

P.S. Knife your sig is farking up my internet.

by **japsa** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:18 pm

Nope, what do you mean by scripted? Unrealistic?

by **SomeRandomPerson** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:20 pm

Lol, Nice, i actually had a idea of making a book of zombies once, then i realised (no pun intended) Zombies have been done, To death. Still, cool story

by **knife in a box** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:26 pm

Superevil225 wrote:Nice story... I'd say that the dialouge sounds a little scripted, if you know waht I mean... Other than that I like it.

P.S. Knife your sig is farking up my internet.

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by **SomeRandomPerson** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:29 pm

Well its a flash vid, it lags the browser and its kinda lagging my comp too which is odd cause my comp could and can and SHould handle alot

by **japsa** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:30 pm

If you don't Superevil you will be downloading the sig to the temporary files every time you view it.

by **SomeRandomPerson** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:32 pm

Lol i thought it was cause it was so like vivid and from a tv show lol

by **Superevil225** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:35 pm

No it just makes my browser laggy...

Anyway, Japsa what I mean by scripted is it sounds to real. Think of it this way, reality is unrealistic. Get it?

by Sajextryus Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:36 pm

SomeRandomPerson wrote:Well its a flash vid, it lags the browser and its kinda lagging my comp too which is odd cause my comp could and can and SHould handle alot

It's a GIF animation.

by **SomeRandomPerson** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:37 pm

Lol, wow. Thats like something out of a fourtune cookie O.O.... *breaks open fourtune cookie* **reads it (Reality is unrealistic, All but a illusion)**

by **japsa** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:39 pm

The dialogue is always hard. That's the only dialogue I have written so far.

by **SomeRandomPerson** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:41 pm

Lol i uset to post short stories on this fourm site (it got closed down most recently ) but yea this is similar to your stories dialogue but not story line mine was universal domination kinda stuff

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