Run By Story Ideas

OK so this is the thread where if you have an idea for a story and it's a little weird, here is where you ask our nice forum members wether it sounds like it would turn out good, or whether it wouldn't. Or if it sounds too much like something that was already made.

OK I have a really weird one. This came to me in a dream so it's kinda weird. So basically it's set in WW2, and this young german becomes a werewolf. While in werewolf form he kills a whole bunch of men, and the people think he did it. So he escapes Germany and goes into allied territory to hide from the Nazis. The Germans have a group of specially trained men who deal with supernatural events. They are secret so nobody knows about them. So they go to find this traitor. While running away from the germans the boy, his name will be Falko for the time being, discovers the horrid things the Nazis were doing, and gains an extreme hate for Hitler and the Nazis. Falko discovers this group supernatural allies. They are top secret and were made to hunt down Hitler. Falko is discovered by this team and he decides to help them in their mission. So basically it's about him running from the Nazis and the group hunting him, learning to control his werewolf powers, trying to take down hitler with the supernaturals, dealing with the war, and the troubles of growing up.

P.S. Falko is actually a real german name. I met a German named Falko. He was soooooo hot... mmmmm.

Anyway, do you think it would turn out bad, or does it have potential?

I think it has potential...for a while. The story seems...repetitive.

How so?

Well, wouldn't the story just be fight a few guys, hide, fight a few guys, hide, track, until they find and kill Hitler?

I see! Ok that makes sense. So spice it up a bit more. Makes sense. Lets throw in some gore, drugs, rum, sex, and lesbians. wow sounds like something from Japsa's imagination. XD. jk

I ROFLD major at that last line

But now you're talkin'. This could have some major potential if you just add a little bit of pizzaz to it. Good luck!

Thanks!

Because the whole Nazi experiment, super-soldier thingy gets gang raped as much as zombies. You need to throw a curve ball at the blind kid. What that means is, Something that makes the story unique in comparison to others of the same theme.

Hmmm OK. So, something that would really make it different.... hmmm.... any ideas? Also Russia was allies right?

It doesn't seem plausible that he would be able to get out of German territory and get into Allied territory. He could probably get into Poland or Russia.

As for the curve, I'll let you know if I catch something. =]

M'kay! Thanks J-Dawg.

Why do I recognize this plot idea?

Hmm.....

A good idea overall. Especially coming from a dream (my dreams SUCK. I'm always running away from something in super slo-mo >.>)

I think it's a little too cliche to go after Hitler, however. Maybe they should go after one of his commanders or something.

Dude, only way to end the war is too kill Hitler. Be realistic! XD But I get what you're saying. It probably reminds you a bit of the League of Extraordinary Gentlemen, 'cause of the group of cool people... and X-Men Origins.... and Transformers... and Percy Jackson and The Olympians..... OK I get it it's slightly over used! :3 Meh, whatever, came in a dream so yeahhhh. I was also going to have Falko be more obsessed with getting back at Colonel Strauss (Guy hunting him) than Hitler. I love german names. They are sexy. Strauss, Kohler, Falko...... *Dreams*

Well, Hitler wasn't killed by a werewolf... Sooooooo, I think killing Hitler is out of the question IMHO.

I think, if you really want him hunting Hitler, you should have him ATTEMPT to hunt Hitler and fail. May sound a bit rough on the edges but really, I think you shouldn't focus on hunting Hitlaaa.

Only suggestions, feel free to ignore

Then it might seem a bit like Hulk and Abomination(??).

Well Hitler wouldn't be personally involved in the experiments, he wouldn't be overseeing them. But some Generals would have.

What experiments????? I never mentioned any experiments! What? I was thinking the people were just really smart or encountered supernatural events in their past.

Superevil225 wrote:discovers the horrid things the Nazis were doing, and gains an extreme hate for Hitler and the Nazis.

That's what I thought you meant, my bad.

T'was talking about the killing of thousands of Jews. Apparently many low ranking soldiers didn't know what was happening! XD Sucks to be them.